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How dumb!
The worm is tooooo mechanical, as if without life.
Gosh! I am putting it up here only to find where I should improve.
The worm is tooooo mechanical, as if without life.
Gosh! I am putting it up here only to find where I should improve.
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Hey pooja.
ok let me begin your tiitle says worm eating leaf so you show part of leaf already being eaten so that it gives the viewer that the leaf is actually been eaten and your worm needs to be more wriggly,it has got one right angled bend thats all.
there are good points too..
you have worked on shadowing and also shown shades of green on the leaf which is really good .
i always risk when crticising art so please be dont angry with me
ok let me begin your tiitle says worm eating leaf so you show part of leaf already being eaten so that it gives the viewer that the leaf is actually been eaten and your worm needs to be more wriggly,it has got one right angled bend thats all.
there are good points too..
you have worked on shadowing and also shown shades of green on the leaf which is really good .
i always risk when crticising art so please be dont angry with me